The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.

The bar chart compares the amount of money (in millions of euros) that people in four different age groups from Paris, France, spent on going to the cinema, restaurants and music concerts in 2019.
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The bar graph illustrates the difference in spending(in millions of
euros
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) in countries like Paris and France on cinema,hotels and music concerts in 2019 by people of four different ages.
overall
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,the graph depicts the
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spent on various activities based on their age and their interest.
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,18-25-year-old youngsters have spent very little amount of cash on restaurants
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to other ages.
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,
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used for music concerts
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from 13-15 million
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and
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cinema is at the lowest of all.
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, cash used for cinemas has increased between the ages of 26 to 39.
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, it gradually decreases from the age of 40-86.
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to that, music concerts have
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acquired the interest of youngsters and
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moderately declined from 26-86 years old. In the end, middle-aged people that are 40-55 years old had an expenditure of more than 20 million for hotels.Followed by,26-39 and 56 -86 categories people should have used 18 and 16 million on hotels.
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