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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
 of female high school leavers pursuing higher education in five different countries:
UK
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the UK
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,
USA
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the USA
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,
Australia
, South
Korea
, and
France
 in 1985 and 2015.
Overall
, the
percentage
 of female high
school-leavers
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school leavers
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 in
Australia
 is the highest among
other
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the other
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 4 countries. The rates of high school girls pursuing higher education
from
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in
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 the
UK
, USA, and
Australia
 are higher than the rates in South
Korea
 and
France
. The lowest
percentage
 of female students leaving high school to pursue higher education is from
Korea
. In 1980, the highest
percentage
 of female students going to universities with close to 60% is from
Australia
. The country with the lowest
rate
 of
graduated
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apply
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girls studying
further
 in universities at a little over 10% is
from
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apply
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South
Korea
. The
percentage
 of
three
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the three
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 remaining nations, the
UK
,
USA
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the USA
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, and
France
,
have
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is
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 slightly over 30%, nearly 40%, and exactly 50% orderly. In 2015, the
rate
 of school-graduated girls entering colleges in
Australia
remains
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remained
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 the same as in 1980 at slightly under 60%,
while
 the
rate
 of USA’s female graduates entering college
rises
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rose
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 to around the same
rate
 as
Australia
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in Australia
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. South
Korea
 is at the lowest
rate
 at 30%. The other two countries, the
UK
, and
France
, both have the
percentage
 of
female-graduates
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female graduates
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 going
further
 in college at over 50%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, uk, australia, korea, france, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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