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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
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 of female high school leavers pursuing higher education in five different countries:
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UK
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the UK
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,
USA
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the USA
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,
Australia
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, South
Korea
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, and
France
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 in 1985 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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 of female high
school-leavers
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school leavers
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 in
Australia
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 is the highest among
other
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the other
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 4 countries. The rates of high school girls pursuing higher education
from
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in
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 the
UK
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, USA, and
Australia
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 are higher than the rates in South
Korea
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 and
France
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. The lowest
percentage
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 of female students leaving high school to pursue higher education is from
Korea
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. In 1980, the highest
percentage
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 of female students going to universities with close to 60% is from
Australia
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. The country with the lowest
rate
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 of
graduated
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apply
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girls studying
further
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 in universities at a little over 10% is
from
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apply
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South
Korea
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. The
percentage
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 of
three
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the three
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 remaining nations, the
UK
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,
USA
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the USA
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, and
France
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,
have
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is
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 slightly over 30%, nearly 40%, and exactly 50% orderly. In 2015, the
rate
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 of school-graduated girls entering colleges in
Australia
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remains
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remained
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 the same as in 1980 at slightly under 60%,
while
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 the
rate
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 of USA’s female graduates entering college
rises
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rose
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 to around the same
rate
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 as
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Australia
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in Australia
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. South
Korea
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 is at the lowest
rate
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 at 30%. The other two countries, the
UK
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, and
France
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, both have the
percentage
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 of
female-graduates
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female graduates
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 going
further
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 in college at over 50%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, uk, australia, korea, france, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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