The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. The table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. The 

table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by 

selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the proportion of
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diverse
languages
which
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used by many individuals online throughout
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2001. The table below depicts the number of people and the percentage of people online over 5-year periods.
Overall
, it is clear from the pie chart that the majority of the population
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online platforms spoke English
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43% followed by Japanese at 8.9%
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to Chinese
by
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8.8%
then
German at roughly 6.8%, Spanish at 6.5%, Korean
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4.6%, Italian with 3.8% followed by French at 3.3%,
Potuguese
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Portuguese
by 2.6%
then
Dutch at 2.1% and the others. Observing the
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from the table, it is remarkable that the population
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significanty
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significantly
rose by 1.8%
of
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all
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in November 1997 increased to 3.6% in the next year
then
slightly climbed to 4.6 in August 1999 and dramatically soared to 6.0 in the 20th century
then
reached its peak at 8.4 throughout the reporting period.
To sum up
, with what has been analysed and compared it is crucial to highlight that many individuals are more present in the visual society.
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