You are supposed to submit a history project by 11th November. However, your sister is getting married in Hawaii at the same time. You would like an extension on the due date for submitting the project. Write to your professor. In your letter: explain the situation, remind the professor of your excellent academic record to date, ask for an extension of the due date.

Dear Dr. Ali , Greetings of the day I am writing
this
letter regarding the project submission as per your request the
last
date
should be
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submit the project is on the
11st
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of November. Unfortunately my
sister’s
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Manar
she get
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married
in
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the same deadline in Hawaii. As I am
oldest
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sister in my family I need more time to
preparing
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for her wedding and help her
furthermore
,we are going to
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to Hawaii on the 5th of November During
lecture
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and
last
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3 months I never was late of submit any assignments always I on time please find the
attched
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attached
for
further
refrence
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reference
. I would like to request to
extenion
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extension
my
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assignments to 15 days it
si
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convenient for me to do my assignments
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ease . I am looking forward to getting positive feedback from you. Best regards, Ruqayah
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