The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.
The Pie charts present the proportion of
water
used for three different purposes in six areas of
world
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.
Overall
, more percentage of
water
was used for industrial needs in North
America
and Europe. In
case
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of South
America
, Central
Asia
, Africa, and South East
Asia
maximum usage of
water
was for agricultural
purpose
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purposes
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. In North
America
, around about 50% of
water
was used for Industrials applications,
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in
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case
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of Europe where 53% of total
water
was used for the same purpose and it is
also
the
higest
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highest
proportions
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proportion
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of
water
used for
this
cause in all
given
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regions. Domestic usage was
higest
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highest
, 19% in South
America
and lowest, 7% in Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
. The
water
used for crops in South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
was 71%, 84%, 88%, and 81%, respectively. The
higest
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highest
percentage for watering the crops in Central Asi,
whereas
only 12% of
total
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was utilized for other purposes.
This
trend was almost
same
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in
case
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of Africa and South East
Asia
, in these countries only 16 to 19%
water
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was utilized for other causes, all remained for crops.
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  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
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