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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The Pie charts present the proportion of
water
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 utilized for three separate reasons in six different regions of the world.
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, the maximum
water
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 was used for industrial needs in North
America
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 and Europe. In the case of South
America
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, Central
Asia
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, Africa, and South East
Asia
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 maximum usage of
water
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 was for agricultural purposes. In North
America
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, around
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50% of
water
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 was used for
Industrials
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 applications, the same was in the case of Europe where 53% of total
water
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 was used for the same purpose and it is
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 the highest proportion of
water
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 used for
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 cause in all the given regions. Domestic usage was highest, 19% in South
America
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 and lowest, 7% in Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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. The
water
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 used for crops in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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 was 71%, 84%, 88%, and 81%, respectively. The highest percentage for watering the crops in Central Asi,
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 only 12% of the total was utilized for other purposes.
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 trend was almost the same in the case of Africa and South East
Asia
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, in these countries only 16 to 19% of
water
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 was utilized for other causes, all remained for crops.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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