The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.
The charts give data about the
number
of people affected by four types of noise pollution day
and night
in cities
and rural areas
in 2007.
As can be seen, the number
of individuals who were affected by traffic pollution is the highest in both cities
and rural areas
, in cities
there are more or less 60 million
humans who were affected during the day
, and at night
their number
was less than 50 million
, however
, in rural areas
their number
is roughly 33 million
people in a day
and approximately 22 at night
. The lowest number
of people affected by noise pollution was industry, in cities
in a day
it was roughly 1 million
, and at night
the number
of human beings was almost invisible it was less than 1 million
, in rural areas
no one was affected by the industry at both time
during a Change to a plural noun
times
day
and at night
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