The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.

The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.
The charts give data about the
number
of people affected by four types of noise pollution
day
and
night
in
cities
and rural
areas
in 2007. As can be seen, the
number
of individuals who were affected by traffic pollution is the highest in both
cities
and rural
areas
, in
cities
there are more or less 60
million
humans who were affected during the
day
, and at
night
their
number
was less than 50
million
,
however
, in rural
areas
their
number
is roughly 33
million
people in a
day
and approximately 22 at
night
. The lowest
number
of people affected by noise pollution was industry, in
cities
in a
day
it was roughly 1
million
, and at
night
the
number
of human beings was almost invisible it was less than 1
million
, in rural
areas
no one was affected by the industry at both
time
Change to a plural noun
times
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during a
day
and at
night
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • number of people
  • affected by
  • types of noise pollution
  • cities
  • rural areas
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • daytime
  • nighttime
  • summarize
  • main findings
  • conclusion
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