The pictures show the process of making cherry jam. Describe the process.

The diagram demonstrates the process of preparing cherry
jam
. There are 9 main stages in the process, beginning with collecting the
cherries
and transporting them to the factory and ending with putting the
jam
into jars.
First,
you should collect the
cherries
. A sheet is spread on the ground and the tree
shaken
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is shaken
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to get the
cherries
. After
that
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that,
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the
cherries
are transported to the processing plant.
Then
the leaves and stems are removed.
The next step is
washing the
cherries
. The stone is taken out of the middle of the cherry. Now the
cherries
are ready to cook and add extra ingredients. In the
factory
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factory,
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some experts check the quality of the
jam
. The
jam
are
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is
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put into jars. The final stage is to stick
label
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labels
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on the jars.
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