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It is recommended that traditional market be phased out and replaced by supermarket and e-commerce. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#market #supermarket #e-commerce
The public
associate
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 life with progress, regarding shopping, they believe street stores should operate
in
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on
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 a larger scale like
supermarket
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supermarkets
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 or online shops.
Although
 traditional and modern stores both have their own merits, I reckon
truning
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turning
 to modern
business
shceme
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scheme
 brings about more advantages.
Firstly
, change is inevitable and all businesses should
adopt
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 to the new world.
For example
, people from all walks of life, who have a hectic schedule, enjoy
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turning
 to a supermarket
where
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fulfills
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 all of their needs.
Moreover
, The new society is unlikely to allocate time for shopping around for
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simple
gerocery
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grocery
 shopping.
As a result
, all stores should stimulate
adoptation
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adoption
 to make
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life more convenient for the community. Since supermarkets and online shops, which are
accessable
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accessible
 all the time, can offer a vast range of goods, they are highly likely to be effective.
Secondly
,
due to
 a cutting-throat competition among shops, migrating to the new form of
business
 brings about financial benefits. For
exmaple
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example
, supermarkets and e-commerce pave the way for making
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collaboration with commodity providers. When it comes to
negotiatation
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negotiation
negotiations
, thanks to their user base and cash flow, they have a competitive advantage to bargain with providers.
Therefore
, they can provide the public with a lower price for their items. Since the community is becoming money
consious
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conscious
,
this
 means a lot for the customers and brings more profit for the
business
. In conclusion, traditional markets must convert to
supermakets
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supermarkets
 and e-commerce. Not only
this
 migration is a top-notch solution to
fulfill
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 their customers' demands, but
also
this
 is a second-to-none way to survive
from
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competition in the
business
 world.
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