Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

Male and female genders are not similar in
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range of opportunities and skills. Because of
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do one kind of
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better than
women
and
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versa.
Overall
,
men
and
women
have different biological
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attributes
that influence their beings. First of all, in my
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men
can manage jobs linked with
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physical
attributes better than
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woman
women
because of of their being.
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, it would be more difficult to work in mining, construction, sailing, cargo,
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etc
. for
women
than
men
.
Secondly
,
women
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professions where they work with children.
For instance
, kindergarten, nursery, hospital, etc.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate
  • biological differences
  • characteristics
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • gender biases
  • fair representation
  • skills
  • qualifications
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