Some people think that going to a fitness centare regularly is unnecssary. Instead they believe the combining occasional exrcise(such as going for walk) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many

people

believe that going to a gym on a regular basis is not enough to stay healthy. They think that it would be more useful to

consolidate

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continue

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doing sports and keeping a wholesome diet. I tend to support

an

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opinion that it is essential to play sports.

However

, eating normally is needed too.

To begin

with, it is very important to exercise and to consume

food

full of nutrients.

Firstly

, if a person would like to keep fit,

for example

, they should always eat healthy products. The science proves

of

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it. Exercising

are

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is

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not

so

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as

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beneficial as it could be with keeping a balanced diet.

Secondly

,

people

's bodies need

vitamins

which can be collected from

food

.

Thus

, a person should strive to consume healthy products and all doctors recommend

to do

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it.

Therefore

, if

people

try to save their health, they do not have to combine these two significant factors.

On the other hand

,

people

have an opportunity

of eating

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to eat

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various

food

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foods

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but

collecting

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useful substances,

for instance

, proteins, fats, and carbohydrates, from

vitamins

. Nowadays there are a lot of

vitamins

which can be bought at a

farmacy

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farm

so it is not needed to always eat only healthy

food

.

Hovewer

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However

,

people

should not

to

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forget about

vitamins

if they do not have a chance to eat

food

full of nutrients. In conclusion, I tend to think that going to a fitness

center

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centre

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should be combined with taking a balanced diet to stay healthy but each person

choose

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the best option for themselves.