You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the total spending on three different categories by
the
Great Britain of different Correct article usage
apply
age
group
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groups
people
in 2004.
Upon reviewing the chart, it can be observed that the hightest
proportion of money was spent on buying food and drinks products, and Correct your spelling
highest
this
expenditure increased steadily with age
groups, starting from approximately 7 per cent
for individuals under 30 and reaching nearly 23 per cent
for those aged 76 and above.
According to
the given information, individuals under 30 spent
a significant amount of money on Wrong verb form
spend
restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
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hotels
category
. Fix the agreement mistake
categories
Furthermore
, people
in the age
group
of 31 to 45 and 45 to 60 had almost similar expenditure
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expenditures
on
the same category, Change preposition
in
whereas
there was a huge difference between the age
group
of under 30 to 60 and 61 to 75 years old british
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British
people
, elderly people
of age
group
61 to 75 spent only 2 per cent
on restaurants and hotels.
On the other hand
, same as Correct article usage
the food
food
and drink category, expenditure on entertainment had a significant increase with Correct article usage
the food
age
groups, starting from nearly 7 percent
for youngsters and reaching roughly 23 per Change the spelling
per cent
cent
for those aged 76 and above.Submitted by simran31788 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group, people, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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