The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart provides information about the percentage of four southeast
asian
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countries
Philippines
, Malaysia
, Thailand
, and Indonesia
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that lived in urban area
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areas
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population
from 1970 to 2020, along with
its prediction for the next 20 years.
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countries
except the Philippines
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population
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At the beginning of the period, the percentage of people who lived in cities
in the four countries
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Philippines
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the Philippines
Malaysia
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at around
while
Thailand
and Indonesia
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population
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populations
Malaysia
, Thailand
, and Indonesia
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On the other hand
, Philippines
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the Philippines
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citizens
Thailand
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living
cities
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, philippines, malaysia, thailand, indonesia, population, cities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 4 times.
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