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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the amount of money from four different countries during 10
years
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Overall
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, within
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 time Japan had the biggest price when the lowest was in the USA. Japan at the beginning sold bananas for a little under 2
dollars
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, and the next two
years
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 for them were strange because they rose and fell rocket. After that over the period of 3
years
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 do not change a lot. In 2001 they decreased their sales approximately to 1.65
dollars
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, upsurge to 2.50
dollars
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 by to end of the period. France did not have a market for 4
years
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 after that started to fluctuate and came almost to the set-out. Germany does not change so lot, it vibrates between nearly 1.40
dollars
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 and about 1.20
dollars
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USA
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The USA
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 picked from just under 1 dollar and after 5
years
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 accounts for roughly 1.10
dollars
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 and does not change during left time.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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