The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The diagram illustrates the stages of the Monarch butterfly's life cycle.
Overall
Linking Words
, the whole process involves four different phases in which the insect undergoes several transformations before turning into a butterfly. The cycle starts when after mating the butterflies lay their eggs on a milkweed, where after fourteen days those are hatched into small
larva
Fix the agreement mistake
larvae
show examples
.
This
Linking Words
stage is called larval one. These young insects crawl along the milkweed before being attached to it to hang upside down. For the next ten days, these little larvas are being covered with hard cover to protect the upgoing development of a butterfly.
This
Linking Words
stage is called pupar. In the next
stage
Add a comma
stage,
show examples
an adult insect emerges from a chrysalis and migrates to
south
Add an article
the south
show examples
for approximately six months before coming back north to find a mating partner. The whole
life-cycle
Correct your spelling
life cycle
show examples
lasts over half a year and starts again when butterflies reproduce and lay new eggs on a milkweed.
Submitted by katja.otavina on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
What to do next:
Look at other essays: