The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information on education and
employment
rates
in eight different countries
in Europe in 2015. Overall
, there's a clear correlation between the employment
rate and the average income
as well as
education rates
, meaning, the higher the employment
the higher the other rates
are, despite few exceptions.
In the
northern European Correct article usage
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countries
like UK
, Norway and Austria, Correct article usage
the UK
all
the Correct determiner usage
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employement
, education and Correct your spelling
employment
income
rates
are higher than in the other countries
employing for
over 70% of Change preposition
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population
. The exception is, Add an article
the population
however
, for Austria, whose average income
is only half of that in Norway, which is the highest in table
(41,483).
The second highest Add an article
the table
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income
is found in Luxemburg (34,320), although
, its employment
rates
are relatively low, under 70%, similarly
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Portugal
, but in Correct word choice
and Portugal
those
the average Add a comma
those,
income
is only under 10,000. Nevertheless
, in Greece, only half of the population is employed, the
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and the
income
is 7,520 compared to Bulgaria, where 60% are working, but the average salary is approximately slightly over 3,000, which makes it the lowest compared to the other countries
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