Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings of the day. I am writing

this

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letter to

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a complaint

the complaint

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complaint

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complain

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regarding

last

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week

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on the

12nd

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12th

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of October 2023 I purchased

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laptop

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a laptop

the laptop

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from the store my name is Ruqayah since I bought the Dell

Laptop

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which is

completely

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a completely

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perfect brand I

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have been

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facing

this

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week

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the

lappto

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laptop

suddenly

restart

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restarted

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addition

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apply

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has

been charges

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and it happened to me entire weeks. I have

meeting

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a meeting

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this

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week

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consequently

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, I have to submit the tasks at least

this

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week

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also

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, I have to

preparing

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prepare all my work

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for

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meeting all my work on the

laptop

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. I would like to suggest replacing my

laptop

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I am

constant

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a constant

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client for you kindly taking

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issue into consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ruqyah

luhana.chii

Oct 7, 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

128 words

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Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do Write at least 150 words.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too You do NOT need to write any addresses.

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world.

Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say : 1. Congratulate your friend 2. Ask when would be possible for you to visit 3. Ask what present they would like.

Some people believe physical education classes should be mandatory for all school aged children. Some people argue children should use their spare time on academic purpose. Discuss both point of views and give an opinion