the diagram shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided process diagram represents the stages of electricity generation in a hydroelectric
power
station.
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overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
this
linear process Linking Words
commencing
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commences
water
coming from the river into a high-level Use synonyms
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reservior
and ending with generating Correct your spelling
reservoir
power
in the Use synonyms
power
station.
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To begin
with, river Linking Words
water
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go
to Change the verb form
goes
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a high
high level
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high-level
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reservior
closed by a dam at night Correct your spelling
reservoir
time
and opened at day Use synonyms
time
to intake. Use synonyms
At
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In
day
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the daytime
time
, when the dam Use synonyms
open
the flow of Change the verb form
opens
water
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run
to generate electricity by reversible Correct subject-verb agreement
runs
turbines
. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
water
goes through reversible Use synonyms
turbines
, which Use synonyms
operates
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operate
generator
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the generator
at
day Change preposition
in
time
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and than
than
go to Replace the word
then
low-level
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the low-level
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reservior
. Correct your spelling
reservoir
Moreover
, Linking Words
generator
is connected Add an article
the generator
a generator
with
the reversible Change preposition
to
turbines
in the Use synonyms
power
station, which generate Use synonyms
power
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and
that goes to Correct word choice
apply
national
grid through Add an article
the national
power
lines.
At night Use synonyms
time
, Use synonyms
water
from Use synonyms
low-level
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the low-level
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reservior
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reservoir
reservoirs
pumped
by the reversible Add a missing verb
is pumped
turbines
and help the Use synonyms
water
to flow during pumping into the high-level Use synonyms
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reservior
. Correct your spelling
reservoir
This
process Linking Words
keep
going and Change the verb form
keeps
generate
Correct subject-verb agreement
generates
power
through the generator.Use synonyms
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