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Most companies and organizations requires their employees to wear uniforms to work. what are the jobs that need uniform? what are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work?

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In recent times majority of
companies
 have their own
uniforms
, and by the
rules
, employees should wear them.
However
, not all of them like to wear it.
Overall
, I would say that
workers
 should have their own opinion,
in addition
, there are some drawbacks, but in my opinion, the advantages outweigh them. One strong argument in favour of drawbacks is comfortability.
This
 means that sometimes the wear of
companies
 might be uncomfortable.
Moreover
, because of the
rules
 between some
workers
 and employees might be questions and misunderstandings.
According to
 the statistics of
last
 2022 year in just over 40 per
cent
 of
companies
 employers do not agree with the
rules
, where wrote about
uniforms
.
Furthermore
, because of
this
 problem thousands of
workers
 left the
companies
.
Therefore
, owners of
companies
 have to give comfortable
rules
, like wearing anything, and after that might be no problem with the wear of
companies
. There are several arguments why wearing
uniforms
 can be beneficial for most
workers
.
Firstly
,
this
 is definitely not spending money on work wear.
In other words
,
workers
 will not spend money on buying clothes for work, which is comfortable, and will save money. The statistics of
last
 2022 year showed that more than half per
cent
 of
companies
 had their own uniform,
furthermore
, 95 per
cent
 of them were happy about it.
Secondly
, it is an advertisement for shops,
companies
 etc. The explanation for
this
 may be huge
companies
 like Samsung, Apple and so on.
Additionally
, visitors will look for the
workers
 and the high level of
companies
, it will improve sales of
companies
.
For instance
, by adding new
uniforms
, Xiaomi company’s percentage of sales was uplifted by 24 per
cent
last
 year.
Consequently
,
uniforms
 can lead to quite useful advantages. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that having our own
uniforms
 can be more beneficial than not wearing them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Mandatory attire
  • Professional ensemble
  • Dress code
  • Corporate identity
  • Branding
  • Safety gear
  • Team cohesiveness
  • Institutional image
  • Employee morale
  • Personal expression
  • Uniformity
  • Hierarchy
  • Workwear
  • Standardized attire
  • Individuality
  • Cost implications
  • Sustainability issues
  • Comfort fit
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