The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966,1986 and 2006
The above graph depicts the ratios of
first
childbirth mothers in Australia for different Correct word choice
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age
group
in 1966, 1986 and 2006 respectively.
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groups
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that the Correct your spelling
clearly demonstrated
age
groups of first childbirth has
varied Change the verb form
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overtime
.
It can be observed that Correct your spelling
over time
a
trend of having babies in their teen years has changed over Correct article usage
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the
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For instance
, in 1996 majority of women who have given birth were aged 19 to 24 which is 62% while
a considerable amount of teenagers were included in the population. This
was roughly a
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one third
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one-third
from
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under 19
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under-19
group
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groups
However
, by 1986, half of girls
were 25 to 30 years and Add an article
the girls
19
-24 Correct article usage
the 19
cluster
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clusters
has
decreased to 37%. Still, it was the second highest Wrong verb form
had
propotion
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proportion
Nevertheless
, in 2006 nearly 45% were aged 30-34 compared to 28% of 19
-24 category.
In comparison, the least popular motherhood Correct article usage
the 19
age
was over 40. For example
, in 1966 it was at the lowest rate of 4% and in 1986 it continued declining to around 2%. Suprisingly
, in 2006 there was a slight growth of 40 and older Correct your spelling
Surprisingly
maternals
yet it was as little as 5%. Ladies Correct your spelling
materials
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of
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the
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age
34-39 displayed a significant uprise over the 40 years, starting from a percentage of 8% in 1966, Replace the word
aged
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up to a rate of 15% in 1986 and Wrong verb form
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development
to 30% in 2006.Replace the word
developing
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