Task 1 The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

Task 1

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The line graph depicts the
abroad
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number of
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visitors to the
UK
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and
UK
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citizens
visit to
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visiting
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other countries from 1979 to 1999, and the bar diagram shows the
location
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locations
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that
UK
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people visited in 1999. The figures are given in millions.
It is clear that
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boths
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both
in travelling of visitors in the
UK
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and
UK
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households
to
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apply
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abroad tended to increase over the giving period,
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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the most popular countries for
UK
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ressidents
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residents
were France and Spain. As the data shows,
UK
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traveled-citizens
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travelled-citizens
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starting with 12 in 1979
then
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over 20 in 1986. After that, the trend had a significant growth from 22 in 1987 to above 50 in 1999.
Similarly
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, The visitors in the
UK
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mildly
incresed
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increased
from around 10 in 1979 to
closely
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close
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13
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to 13
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in 1987,
after
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this
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it had a dramatic
chage
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change
from nearly 14 in 1988 to approximately 30 in 1999.
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