The diagram shows the process of milk production
The pictures illustrate how
milk
production is made. Overall
, there are eight stages in this
process beginning with cows grazing and ending in selling in the supermarkets.
The first step is
that cows are grazed in the pasture. After that, they are taken where they are milked. Then
, they are milked by a milking machine twice a day. Furthermore
, the extracted milk
is stored in refrigeration storage by a milk
tanker before the milk
is delivered to the dairy by a milk
tanker daily. In dairy, some products
are made by different machines. For example
, cheese, cream, and butter are products
that are made from milk
in dairy. Once the products
have been made, the milk
is pasteurized and packaged in various bottles. Subsequently
, the ready products
are moved to supermarkets and shops.
The last
stage is that they are arranged in a showcase in the supermarkets and they are consumed by people.Submitted by askerovhamid06 on
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