The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree

the

adventages

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advantages

of travelling in a group led by a

tour

guide

are varied, and its

disadventages

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disadvantages

are no less noticeable. I personally agree with

this

conviction and

this

essay will provide some

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. There are various reasons for

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a trip with a leader.

First,

not only

they

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know a lot about the place that we want to pass through but

also

they

be

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able to make a plan so we just need to follow the available routine and transportation

don’t

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won’t

be a

seriously

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problem.

Beside

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, there are some hide destinations for

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the visitor

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visitor

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, the

tour

guide

maybe can find

it

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and draw up a list of places worth visiting for us and we will not miss any

stop

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.

Secondly

, whenever we go overseas there

exist

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a

critically

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problem, we can know as “language barriers” and that’s why we must hire a

guide

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tour

to go with.

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, my trip to Japan, which is the most difficult language in

over

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the world, and so on the benefit of that can be

showed

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. On the one

hand

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there are undeniable upsides of

go

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with a group led by a

tour

guide

, but

on the other hand

, it is crystal clear that it has several

difficult

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. As we

can

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know there

are

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some impressive scenery but we

cant

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stop

to enjoy

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it because it can bother the other people

in

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our

tour

. There

are

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also

about the food there, we can have our

personally

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choice and there are some

tour

companies have linked up with restaurants to make

profit

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, that’s really a bad experiment about their local food and specialities in that country.

Moreover

, if you go by yourself you can

have

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your own choice,

plan

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, and don’t need to disturb

any body

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but their always

have

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many inexpedient problems

will

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come to you, but

you

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want to explore and have more experience you

also

can go alone. In conclusion, I totally agree

with

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this

option is the best way to travel in a group led by a

tour

guide

. Don’t get me wrong, travel alone has

its

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own interesting and

worth

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is worth

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a try

some day

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.