Write about the following topic: The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

Nowadays,

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natural issues

are tend

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to

the

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most important

in

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our planet

that

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means the government in each country should prioritise these problems, and the big companies have to be more

responsibility

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to control

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the CO2 emission. Meanwhile, some people believe that everyone should be involved in

this

situation and we have to

be cope

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with the challenges together. From my point of view, I

agreed

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with

boths

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both

of these views and my ideas will be shown in the following paragraphs before the conclusion inclined. First and foremost,

it is clear that

environmental issues are one of the biggest challenges in our world and the impacts

tended

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to increase continuously

such

as natural disasters,

illiness

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illness

, and global warming.

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, we have to fix or cure

this

damage because we are one of the reasons

that

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why these issues

are still

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are still even worsened

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even

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worsen by CO2 production from

industrial

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sector, power usage laws are inefficiency, and the

people

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activities

did

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not

concern

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about the environment enough like using plastic bags, etc. By the way, the

autorities

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authorities

and large industries have to be the persons that

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up to the regulations and solutions as soon as they can, one of the main reasons

are

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they have the power to control

the

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society

into

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the right way by regulating gas emissions from private

frims

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firms

and encourage these companies to change the process of production to be more friendly with the environment by introducing lower loan rates than usual.

Beside

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this

, the industrial

frims

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firms

have to be more concerned and try to adjust their systems to improve the nature

such

as developing the

equipments

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or technologies. All in all, the people in our society

are

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the

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important role to persude the companies by using green products and

be

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being

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environmental-friendly persons by

did

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not

use

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plastic bags and using public

transportations

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transportation

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if

having

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a chance to

readuce

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reduce

the

emission

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emissions

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.