The graph below compares changes in the birth rate of china and the usa betwwen 1920 and 2000.
The given line graph shows a shift in the childbirth rate that occurs between 2 countries namely
China
and the USA from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
, the most important factor emitted from the graph indicates that China
had the highest delivery rates. Also
, both China
and USA showed a downward trend over the period.
To begin
with, in 1920 USA had the highest birth rate with an approximate number of 12000. It then
fluctuated over the following 20 years between 1925 and 1949. In addition
, there was a sharp fall to 5000 in 1945. It skyrocketed and peaked at 15000, which is double that of children born in 1945. Then
gradually dropped by roughly 7000 in the final year
On the other hand
, China
's birth rate use stood at 10000 in 1920. However
, it slightly increased to about 13000 in 1925 and experienced a slight dip in 1930. Furthermore
, it then
rose to 15000 between 1935 to 1940 and dramatically reduced to 5000in 1940. But drastically increased and peaked at 20000 in 1950. Unfortunately, declined to just below 10000 and gradually decreased to approximately 3000 in the final year.Submitted by boadimaxwell48 on
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