Some people like to try a new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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Different people have different lifestyles, some
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to have new experiences,
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some
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to continue with what they have been doing. Trying new
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mostly provides
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new learning, which enhances
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's knowledge base.
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, doing
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set of activities continuously,
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develops
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's expertise in the specific activities. Both of these
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essay before drawing towards a conclusion. It is a known fact that
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doing something is always a kind of a
challange
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challenge
. The level of challenge differs based on the circumstance. But people like to experience new
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, as looking for a change is
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aspect of human nature. Because it is believed that new opportunities
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rejuvenates
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human
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brain. By doing so, it increases the working capacity and efficiency.
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example
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tasting new food, visiting new places,
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a change in home arrangement would bring these benefits.
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, the need to do new
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would create frustration if that couldn't be achieved.
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, if a person
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to visit new places and his/her budget doesn't facilitate that.
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doing the same thing or continuing with what is familiar, makes someone more comfortable in
day to day
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life.
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, in some cases repeating the same enhances the expertise in that particular topic.
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, reading about the same topic would develop the subject knowledge
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that topic. It can be argued that
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this
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leads people to be in
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comfort zone and could impede their progress.
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, if a toddler continued to do the same, that kid would not be able to walk and run. In summary, working on fresh activities is a good way to have a change in life, but
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should be
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with a better understanding to avoid additional stress.
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, proceeding with a simple lifestyle by doing
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which are familiar makes
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's life
confortable
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comfortable
but could be
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.
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, it could be
sumarised
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summarised
summarized
trying new
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is a good way to have a challenging and everchanging lifestyle to be energised and effective.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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