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Write about the following topic: The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

#topic #world #government #organizations #amount #damage #environment
Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing to notify you about the urgent matter because of which I have to leave. My brother got hit by a motorcycle really hard and now I have to visit him in a hospital.
Moreover
, he has a dog and I need to take care
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 that too. I have really enjoyed working in your department and I am grateful for all
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 knowledge and skills that I have earned here. I want to thank you for all that you and all the team made for me and I hope that eventually I will be able to visit you again. I have booked a ticket for a plane
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this
 Friday afternoon,
hence
 we have some time to say goodbye properly.
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, I will tell
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 that others need to know to finish my tasks and I will stay in touch in case of
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misconceptions
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. If you require any additional information, let me know.
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 sincerely, Basil Turkin
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