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the tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 european countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant

the tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 european countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant
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 figures of
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coffee
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 and bananas in five European countries are presented in the tables. The nations under consideration are Belgium, Denmark, Switzerland, Sweden, and the United
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, the
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 data highlights the growing popularity of
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 products in Europe, as seen by the increase in
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 of
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coffee
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 and bananas between 1999 and 2004. The United
Kingdom
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 emerged as a dominant player in the
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coffee
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 market,
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 Denmark recorded the highest rate of growth in
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 banana
sales
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. A comparison of the
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 data from 1999 and 2004 reveals an interesting trend in the
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coffee
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 market. In 1999, Switzerland dominated the
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coffee
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sales
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, reporting a total of 3
million
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euros
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.
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, by 2004, the United
Kingdom
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 had taken over the lead position, experiencing a significant increase in
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, rising from 1.5
million
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euros
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 to 20
million
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euros
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. All the other countries, including Switzerland, showed a moderate growth in
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coffee
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sales
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 during the same period. The
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 banana market
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 saw a positive growth trend between 1999 and 2004. The United
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 remained the leading seller of
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 bananas in both years, with
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 figures of 15
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and 47
million
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euros
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 in 2004.
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, Denmark recorded the highest rate of increase, with its
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 figures rising from 0.6
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 to 4
million
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 between the two periods.
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, Belgium and Sweden reported a decline in their
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 banana
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, dropping from 1.8
million
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euros
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 to 1
million
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euros
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 and 2
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euros
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 to 0.9
million
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euros
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, respectively, in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, fairtrade, coffee, kingdom, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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