the table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008
The supplied table depicts data about how many people visit the UK after that time is allocated by individuals over the
period
of 6 years between 2003 and 2008.
Seen together, the most significant facts to emerge from the table are that the proportion of visitors remarkably surged during the whole time, whereas
other sections slightly increased apart from average nights per visitors
, which underwent a negligible drop.
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, in 2003, visits accounted for 24.715 million and Fix the agreement mistake
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this
figure merely dramatically rocketed until 2007 then
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point witnessed a drop to 31.88 million in 2008. Besides
, pound billions made up 11.855 billion at the started
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and there was a substantial rise to 16.323 billion at the end
of period
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visits
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