The two map below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The two maps
illustrates
the Change the verb form
illustrate
island
changes and show the previous and current layout after the construction.
Overall
, the old map shows zero building and only contain plenty of trees. However
, in recent picture
, there are a lot of new buildings and Fix the agreement mistake
pictures
couple
of facilities around the Change the article
a couple
island
.
It's clearly to be seen that, previously, the vehicle track and the footpath are
nowhere to be found. Wrong verb form
were
Hence
, a few of
vehicle tracks, now are installed after the pier and Change preposition
apply
round
the reception. Correct your spelling
around
Also
, the footpaths are almost fully placed all over the island
and installed around the accomodations
.
If you Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
were arrived
at the pier, you can walk down to the north through footpath and you can find the reception. If people continue to walk along to the north, they can eat at Wrong verb form
arrive
the
restaurant with Correct article usage
a
nice
view of the sea. There are Add an article
a nice
also
fifteen hotels for people to stay, spreading in
the east and west Change preposition
on
side
of the Fix the agreement mistake
sides
island
. In addition
, people can swimming
Change the verb form
swim
be swimming
in
the beach now.Change preposition
on
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