The two map below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The two map below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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the
island
changes and show the previous and current layout after the construction.
Overall
, the old map shows zero building and only contain plenty of trees.
However
, in recent
picture
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pictures
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, there are a lot of new buildings and
couple
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a couple
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of facilities around the
island
. It's clearly to be seen that, previously, the vehicle track and the footpath
are
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were
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nowhere to be found.
Hence
, a few
of
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apply
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vehicle tracks, now are installed after the pier and
round
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around
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the reception.
Also
, the footpaths are almost fully placed all over the
island
and installed around the
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
.  If you
were arrived
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arrive
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at the pier, you can walk down to the north through footpath and you can find the reception. If people continue to walk along to the north, they can eat at
the
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a
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restaurant with
nice
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a nice
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view of the sea. There are
also
fifteen hotels for people to stay, spreading
in
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on
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the east and west
side
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sides
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of the
island
.
In addition
, people can
swimming
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swim
be swimming
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in
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on
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the beach now.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Island
  • Tourist facilities
  • Construction
  • Overview
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Before
  • After
  • Map
  • Summarize
  • Select
  • Report
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