The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three pie charts below illustrate the proportion of sodium, saturated fat and added

sugar

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consumed in the three different meals in the USA, and they are detrimental to health if consumed too much in quantity.

Overall

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, it is obvious that the majority of sodium and saturated fat are consumed in

dinner

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while

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the maximum quantity of added

sugar

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is eaten in

snacks

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In contrast

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, breakfast accounted for the smallest percentage of all three unhealthy nutrients. Sodium consumption is highest in

dinner

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, and second in lunch, making up 43% and 29% respectively. The proportion of

this

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type of nutrient in breakfast and

snacks

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witnessed a similarity, at 14 per cent.

Dinner

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and lunch are

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the two largest categories in terms of saturated fat with a total of nearly two-thirds.

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this

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kind of unhealthy nutrient is slightly higher in

snacks

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than in breakfast. Compared with the other two nutrients, added

sugar

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has a relatively lower consumption in

dinner

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, with only just over 20%. It is

snacks

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that are the greatest source of

sugar

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intake, at a percentage of 42.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, dinner, snacks with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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180 words

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