Students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think
students
should go abroad to learn different languages and local
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for their school time. I believe that using the opportunity to explore and obtain the
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diverse
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far
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the drawbacks. Learning
language
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would be easier when the
students
in
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a foreigne
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foreign
country, it
also
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straightforward program to
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their expression barrier.
For example
, some
of
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students
may have good grammar and spelling, and others may opposite from that which had
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perfect speech on the speaking but not satisfying
on
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the
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writing.
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could resolve the problem once they were
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outside of their comfort zone.
Therefore
, the scenario would force them to write and speak
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properly
when they
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documents from the university department or
would
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able to communicate with local people.
As a result
, it would be useful and helpful for any
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foreign
foreigner
learner without
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their expression, but
also
enhance the
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on
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their study scheme. In comparison, living in the mother tongue area to learn
other
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language
could be difficult for them which would hardly
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control their discipline
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study
plan
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.
For instance
,
students
are confident to use their first
language
to express themself, if the
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school
to
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restrict
or
prevent
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them
to speak
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from speaking
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another
language
in
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or
on
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a
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specific
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, some
students
would not follow the rules correctly and it would
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the learning outcome especially
,
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when they facing a foreigner they would only use certain
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sentence
or vocabulary to communicate with them which means the conversation could not go more
further
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,
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school
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made
the
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discipline
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their guideline
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not
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students
would follow the order to learn
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language
, the result can be seen
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the
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high school
students
. In conclusion, obtanning
other
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other languages
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language
could be tough when the
students
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their comfort zone, but if they have an opportunity to go
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abroad
that would be
idealy
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ideal
ideally
for them to
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gain
and
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various
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perspectives
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. I firmly
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living in
different
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country to study the
language
and
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lifestyle
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that is
a
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vital
course for them to develop and adopt their ability
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their second or third
language
.
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