Today, people can work and live almost anywhere they want to because of the improvements in communication technology and transport. Do you think that the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The advent of the

internet

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the public

live

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and

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. Nowadays, the advancement of contact

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and conveyance provides more choices for the location of residence and employment. In my opinion,

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change has more merits and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with,

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development brings many conveniences for individuals. The most obvious one is online shopping, it happens every day as long as the

internet

is accessible, and

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the advanced logistics system, we can purchase products from distant places and even foreign

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in a more rapid and more economical way than before.

In addition

, distance education makes it possible for more students to learn their

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professional courses and acquire a satisfactory job, since we can study and work from home on the

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without having to be apart from our

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as often as we used to, which makes it easier for us to achieve a work-life balance.

Furthermore

,

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trend provides

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efficient method for company operation.

For example

, video conferencing software allows

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employees in different

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to communicate face to face, which makes decisions more instant and saves

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time and travel expenses. Another example is

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film studios, the samples shot by

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group

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can be sent back directly to the company on the

internet

for verification,

instead

of shooting multiple sets for the same scene, which saves a lot of time and

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costs. Admittedly, there is the risk of being hacked for online data. Particularly, the data server of

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film company

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broken by hackers, which

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sensible information, including the script of the film had not been screened, employee details and so on

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leaked.

However

, network security risks can be minimized with proper precautions. In conclusion, the development of interaction and logistics benefits persons and organizations in various aspects despite security risks. It has been an unstoppable tendency.