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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These maps illustrate the present scenario and the future plan for
improvement
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the improvement
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 of a little suburb named Islip. Presently,
this
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area
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 contains a small number of buildings with only connecting roads from the west to the east
whereas
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Future
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the Future
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 development proposal
is showing
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shows
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 a round
road
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 covering the city replacing
previous
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the previous
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 one.
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, several new construction will take place. Islip town has a rural
area
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 now. Some stores are situated beside the main
road
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 and the school is in the shortest part of the
area
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. some
residencial
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residential
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area
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areas
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 can be seen without proper
road
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connection
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connections
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. A sub-
road
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connect
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connects
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 the park and the school from the main
road
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. The plan for the future introduces a nice transport pathway covering the city.
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, there will be a
road
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 for pedestrians. Obviously, all the
building
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buildings
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 and
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area
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areas
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 will be connected with a
road
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.
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, a new bus stand, shopping mall and car parking will be established connected by a walking
road
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 from the main
road
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. New housing will be built
in
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on
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 the north-east side near the car park. Some shops will replace the old
resedinsial
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residential
area
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in
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on
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 the south side and will be relocated beside the dual
carrigeway
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carriageway
. The
area
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 of the park will remain the same place as the school but a housing will be situated in the east of the educational institution.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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