The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates a shift in temperature experienced in a month by three different countries namely
Paris
,
Dubai
, and
Sydney
in a given year.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly from the graph that, the weather report in
Sydney
is not the same as in
Dubai
and
Paris
.
Moreover
,
Paris
and
Dubai
showed a decreasing trend during the end of the given year
while
Sydney
experienced an upward trend.
To begin
with, in January
Sydney
had warm weather which is approximately 23
degrees
Celsius
as compared to
Paris
is the coldest city with a temperature of 5
degrees
Celsius
.
However
, the weather gradually rose to 15
degrees
Celsius
in May and
then
fluctuated between June and July and suddenly dropped back to 5
degrees
Celsius
in December.
Furthermore
,
Dubai
's temperature continues rising and reaching a peak of just above 35
degrees
Celsius
. Unfortunately decreased by roughly 22
degrees
Celsius
in the final month.
In addition
,
Sydney
temperatures gradually drop from April to June and hit their lowest in July above below 15
degrees
, and rose to just above 20
degrees
Celsius
at the end
of the year.
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