8.The charts below show the percentage of people using public transport and that of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line charts below display the
proportion
of individuals that use
their own car and the ones that use
public transportation in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Perth and Adeilaide
from 2000 to 2010.
Correct your spelling
Adelaide
Overall
, in Adeilaide there is a steadily
increase in the Change the adverb
steady
use
of pritivate
Correct your spelling
private
cars
and a slightly
variation in the Change the adverb
slight
use
of public transports
. Brisbane’s public transit rose significantly, Fix the agreement mistake
transport
while
use
of personal Add an article
the use
cars
in Melbourne felt
moderately.
Verb problem
increased
Adeilaide
is the city with Correct your spelling
Adelaide
least
Correct article usage
the least
use
public
transportation , starting the Change preposition
of public
period
with just 5%, this
number fluctuated gradually during all
the Correct determiner usage
apply
period
, before 2008, in 5 different years
reached it
highest point, 6%, but after 2008 it started to drop slightly, returning to 5%. In Brisbane, 15% of humans at the beginning of the Change the pronoun
its
period
used public transits, after two years
, this
proportion
began to grow sharply, getting to 25% in 2006, after remaining two years
stable, it started increasing modestly, ending the period
at appriximately
28%.
70% of individuals in 2000 used their individual vehicle in Adelaide, being the city with the highest number of people using their own car, Correct your spelling
approximately
this
proportion
rose moderately to just above 80% during the next 9 years
, and the last
year it climbed considerably to 90%. Melbourne between 2000 and 2002, had 30% of people using personal cars
, but in 2002 dropped in
10%, being at 20% in 2003, Change preposition
to
this
grew gradually, reaching its begenning
rate in 2007 and during the next 4 Correct your spelling
beginning
years
the proportion
varied, ending the period
with just over 20% of people using private cars
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