It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

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reintroduction
capital punishment
deter
serious crime
controversial
argument
deterrent
potential criminals
heinous act
justice
human rights
government
execute
innocent individuals
legal system
wrongful convictions
alternatives
life imprisonment
parole
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Peoples health is getting worse, and some say this will go on. to what extent do you agree?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because will be able to read everything they want without paying to . To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?

It is important for people to take risks. Both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?