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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The chart illustrates the
amount
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 of households in the country of
the
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US according
by
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 their annual earnings, comparing the years 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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, the income of less than $25,000 had risen by the year
of
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2015,
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 other trends
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 as $25,000 to $49,000 and $100,000 or more presented a decrease despite some fluctuations.
On the other hand
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, the figures for $50,000-$74,999 and $75,000 to $99,999 didn't change a lot over the period and they remained almost the same.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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