Qualities of success in today's world cannot be learnt at university or academic institutions . Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

In today’s world, it is believed that formal education institutions cannot

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enough elements to create a successful person. In

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situation, I mostly agree with

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opinions below. One benefit of real-life experiences is the new ability

of adapting

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to diverse life situations To explain, even without higher education, there are many people who are rushing to work

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and have to finish tasks without support. In

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people will learn different knowledge and

experience

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to achieve

success

which they cannot have in

university

. Another point is that practical experiences are vital to their

success

. To be specific, during working time, the intern can

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with different relationships. They must work in a complicated environment and different situations

such

as large teams, big projects or intense conflicts.

Consequently

, these challenges lead to the positive impacts that they will enhance their negotiating ability and handle any conflicts.

However

, one opposite view to be considered is that academic knowledge might be one of the

element

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of

success

. In detail, the

university

, which demands discussions , debates, and presentations, equips students with critical thinking, logical thinking and problem-solving abilities.

In addition

,

as a result

, the students have been learning many positive things to increase capacity, logic ,methods and qualifications by the

university

which are important for future careers In conclusion,

although

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university

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a few elements

for

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success

But I strongly agree with

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statement because it is advisable that

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young people can develop themselves and communicate effectively

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their dreams.