Many food are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

In the modern day, the advancement of international trade

is allow

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us to

more

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accessible to various raw materials of

food

from across the world. Anyway, international shipment

consume

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a lot of

energies

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,

that is

why it creates

lot

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of pollution and it become one of the major issues

causes

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environment

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environmental

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problems

get

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worse.

Someone

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says

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having local

food

ingredients is the better

way

to

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be reponsible

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reponsible

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responsible

to

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the

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nature. Personally, I agree with

this

statements

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and I am going to explain what are the advantages and disadvantages of

this

controversy.

To begin

with, the first advantage of domestic ingredient consumption is a direct

way

to reduce the pollution from

oversea shipment

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. Because of globalization, humankind

tend

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to overconsume everything nowadays.

the

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another

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advantage is to reserve local

food

recipe

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and ingredient

knowledges

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, It is the ancient

way

of life and

valunable

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valuable

culture. Many people in

this

age tend to overlook local

food

just because they

are thinking

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that it is

out-to-date

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thing or it is unquality, but in

facts

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, lots of local

ingredeints

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ingredients

are full of qualities and benefits for eating more than people know.

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, In Thailand, there

have

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lots of vegetables which are a herb and

be

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able to heal some symptoms, unfortunately, many people do not know and spend more money

to

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expensive imported

food

materials

instead

. In conclusion, I believe that eating domestic foods

are

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more

advantage

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advantageous

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than

consume

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imported

food

.

Due to

it is environment friendly and it is a

way

to save

the

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our world.

Moreover

, overconsumption that happening in the present is not only

unneccessary

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unnecessary

for

human

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but

also

harmful environment.