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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of
milk
production
 in four countries;
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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,
Australlia
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Australia
, Tanzania,
Guatemala
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and Guatemala
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 between 1990 and 2010.
It is clear that
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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produced
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produces
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 more
milk
that
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than
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 other countries
in
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apply
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every year.
Overall
, the
production
 of
milk
 increased in every country, except for
Australia
 which experienced
decreasing
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a decrease
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 over the year.
To begin
, In 1990 the
production
 of
milk
 in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 and
Australia
were
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was
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 similar,
Netherlands
 produced 11.262.000
litres
 and
Australia's
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Australia
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 11.246.000
litres
. But in 2000 and 2010,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 marked an increase from 11.155.000 to 11.466.000
litres
. In comparison, the
production
 in
Australia
drop
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dropped
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 significantly from 11.105.000 to 9.165.000. Tanzania and Guatemala
also
 experienced
growing
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growth
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 in
milk
production
 over the years. Tanzania
starts
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started
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 at 87.000
litres
 in 1990 and reached almost twice its number, 1.550.000
litres
 in 2010. Guatemala had 26.000
litres
 of
milk
 in 1990 and peaked at 84.000. That was almost third times their
production
 in the 90s.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, netherlands, australia, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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