The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart compares the habitual behaviour of tea and
coffee
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consumers among five different Australian
cities
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for one
month
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of observation. As can be observed from the three kinds of bar charts, the 'Bought fresh
coffee
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in
last
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month
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'
group
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experienced the lowest groups among the two other categories in all the mentioned
cities
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.
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Also
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it is worth mentioning that in nearly all
cities
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people want to buy their
coffee
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or tea from a cafe. First of all, the
group
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of people who tended to be in their local cafe
last
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month
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was more than 50% among all Australian
cities
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and the mentioned
group
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was the most popular genre among the three mentioned ones, with a small exception in Adelaide.
On the other hand
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,
community
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a community
the community
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who bought instant
coffee
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the
last
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month
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saw a steady fluctuation among all five
cities
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and gained the second most frequent option for Australian people.
secondly
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, residents who wanted to buy fresh
coffee
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showed
the
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a
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small descending rate of popularity among all
cities
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,
near
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nearly
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45% for Sydney to 35% for Adelaide with
exceptional
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an exceptional
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5 percentages rose for Hobart city.
Therefore
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this
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category sits as the least popular
group
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among
two
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the two
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other
one
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ones
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, month, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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