Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace.Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a univeristy?

Along with
updating and expanding my
knowledge
,
this
program will
also
give me the academic credentials I need to advance in my job. I think
this
course
will allow me to maintain my relevance in the
field
of
computer
science
by ensuring that my
knowledge
is in line with current standards and developments in the industry. After completing my studies in
computer
science
there are lots of opportunities for me in the IT sector, government and many more.
This
course
can
also
help me to start my own business. Many MNC companies will provide me hike income and a good environment.
Additionally
, I would like to make my career path in
this
field
more secure than any other
field
. Eventually, only
computer
science
is suitable for me because I have deep
knowledge
in
this
field
.
Along with
updating and expanding my
knowledge
,
this
program will
also
give me the academic credentials I need to advance in my job. I think
this
course
will allow me to maintain my relevance in the
field
of
computer
science
by ensuring that my
knowledge
is in line with current standards and developments in the industry. After completing my studies in
computer
science
there are lots of opportunities for me in the IT sector, government and many more.
This
course
can
also
help me to start my own business. Many MNC companies will provide me hike income and a good environment.
Additionally
, I would like to make my career path in
this
field
more secure than any other
field
. Eventually, only
computer
science
is suitable for me because I have deep
knowledge
in
this
field
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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