Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Crime

is a hot topic of all time and there

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been done a lot to solve

crime

-based issues all over the world.

While

some

people

believe that enough has been done to prevent

crime

in the world, I would argue that there is still much to deal with aiming to create a crimeless community. On the one hand, one group of

people

think that there have been sufficient actions to fight against

crime

. They prove their arguments by stating current declines in the

crime

rate in different parts of the world. It is evident from statistics being published to

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society that the

crime

rate has been lower

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to the past decades.

This

is mostly reasoned by the current measures being used to cut down the number of

crime

cases. Believing in

such

data from officials, several individuals consider what has been done

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now to prevent

crime

is sufficient.

Moreover

, harsher punishments and stricter laws which have been

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for over ten years deterred criminals

to commit

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a

crime

, and the number of them has descended.

Therefore

,

this

case

also

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many

people

think these law

enforcements

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are working efficiently now.

On the other hand

, there is still much to prevent

crime

, in my opinion. Current measures are not effective enough to find the root of a criminal case. To be more precise, before fighting against

crime

, we should first know what is causing

people

to break

laws

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of the community. Mainly, it is commonly considered that poverty, illiteracy and lack of education about laws presented

to be

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the root reasons why

crime

is happening in certain areas.

Therefore

, no matter what punishments we set against criminals, I believe that we should work on

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social policies, education, and community programs to prevent

crime

in

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society. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that current ways against

crime

are not enough to create a

crime

-off society since we still have to worry about

causes

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of the

crime

.