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do you agree or disagree with the following statement? students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#students #respect #teachers #support
Most of the members think that
students
 nowadays are giving value to teachers ,
while
 others say they are not giving
respect
 to the teachers as in the past. I sympathize with the latter group for the reason, that will ensue in the essay. First of all , there are many ways to learn nowadays,
students
 are less reliant
to
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on
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 tutors
like
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than in
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past
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the past
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. I have pursued French as my second language and I learned with the internet without the support of
educators
 , now I speak and write well. If I wanted to study French one decade ago I
need
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educators
 and
dependent
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 on them and
will
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would
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 give full
respect
 to them.
Furthermore
 , my brother committed a blunder in a school but the
educators
 did not punish him because if he punished him their parents would react to that. Since my brother did not
respect
 him and often it was rude. Educator nowadays
did
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 not do their profession well they only work for the money that comes from the teaching profession. And
also
 the higher expectations among the
students
 towards
educators
also
 play a vital role. Day by day the
respect
 towards
educators
 among the current generations is declining.
To conclude
 , the
students
 are not respecting the
educators
 as much as they did before ,
educators
 are not essential since the influence of technology takes part.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Societal values
  • Student-centered learning
  • Authority
  • Respect
  • Technology
  • Expectations
  • Discipline
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