Governemnts should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Railways deserve more expenditure
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of the roads by the governments. I give my vote in the support of trains because travelling through these is faster. secure, fun, and cost-efficient rather than on highways. So, spending on the railway will be profitable
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for both the public and the administration.
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, If the ministry spends more on the railways, they will get more profit in return, for
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instance, new Rail services will encourage more people to use
this
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service, as they will save their money on buying new
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. It will open new
business
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and opportunities, as
new
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railway station will require the staff and new shops will open around it.
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, the ministry will get more money in
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of Tax and Fare
of
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tickets.
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, it is good for the environment.
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, when hundreds of people
will
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use the
rains
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and subways for commuting the consumption of
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of transportation by
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road will reduce. It will help in reducing the air, the water, and the noise pollution. The government should make
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subway
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rather than new highways, so it will be underground and there will be no need
of cutting
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trees
for making
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the new roads. in conclusion, there will be enormous benefits for the public and government if more amount of
budget
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will
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spend
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on the advancement of railways. If the authorities will invest in it,
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in future it will be the best investment over the roads.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable transport
  • carbon footprint
  • commuter congestion
  • interconnectivity
  • public infrastructure
  • operational costs
  • mass transit
  • urban development
  • energy efficiency
  • socio-economic disparities
  • heritage railways
  • tourist attractions
  • environmental conservation
  • urban sprawl
  • renewable energy
  • high-speed rail
  • infrastructure investment
  • traffic management
  • public-private partnership
  • cross-country connectivity
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