The given line graph illustrates the average number of United Kingdom passengers going each day by car, bus, or train from 1970 to 2030.

The given line graph illustrates the average number of United Kingdom passengers going each day by car, bus, or train from 1970 to 2030.
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average number of workers using cars, buses or trains, measured in millions, in the UK over a 60-year period between 1970 and 2030.
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, what stands out from the graph is that the car was always and will be the most popular transportation among commuters,
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travelling by bus had a steady downward trend. Another point is that the train will be a far more successful vehicle than the bus. Observing the details, the figure for people moving by car started at approximately 5
million
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, followed by a constant growth to 9
million
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passengers in 2030. As for buses,
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type of transportation stood at around 4
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commuters. Having been the second most popular vehicle, it will decrease moderately to just under 3
million
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in 2030.
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, the train was the least usable transport starting at about 2
million
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, but
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it rose significantly to 3
million
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travellers in 2000. Despite staying remained during a decade between 2000 and 2010, the number of employees using trains will go up dramatically to approximately 5
million
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in 2030.
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