the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.

the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
The given bar chart exemplifies the consumption and purchasing habits of
tea
and
coffee
by civilians across five Australian cities. Units are denoted as a percentage.
Overall
, most individuals in most of the cities, opt to go to a cafe for
tea
or
coffee
in the past 4 weeks as opposed to Adelaide, where instant
coffee
was the more popular option.
Additionally
, Australians prefer instant
coffee
more than fresh
coffee
. Melbourne and Hobart had the highest percentage of consumers which was customers who chose
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
4 weeks attributing to just above 60% with Sydney emerging in second with exactly 60%. People in Brisban recorded the maximum percentage of instant
coffee
bought in the
last
month which was just more than. Simultaneously, the lowest values were
also
by Brisban and Adelaide for fresh
coffee
which was about 35%. Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart continued to have dominant customers in
tea
and
coffee
as opposed to the other cities in the past given weeks.
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