Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own options.

Since we have one planet that we need to preserve for us and for
our
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future
generation
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, we should exert every effort to save it.
Unfourtenatly
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Unfortunately
,
our
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Mother Earth has been affected
tremandously
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tremendously
throughout the years by our presence as human beings. Nowadays, some animals and plants
became
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extinct, which
make
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some think that their loss
impated
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impacts
our ecosystem,
while
others
believes
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believe
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that there are various factors we should consider to fix our
enviromental
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environmental
issues. Throughout
this
, thesis I will discuss both
point
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of
views
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as well as
mine. On one side, some people believe that lost living organisms like specific
type
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types
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of plants or
mammles
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mammals
have affected the life on Earth, referencing
to
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the balance
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystem
  • Extinction
  • Habitat destruction
  • Pollution
  • Climate change
  • Deforestation
  • Conservation
  • Preservation
  • Sustainable development
  • Balance
  • Interconnectedness
  • Ecological footprint
  • Global warming
  • Natural resources
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