The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
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The diagram depicts the stages of goods
producing
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production
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as well as
the flow of constructive review to the product.
Overall
, there are 10 steps to manufacture particular goods and
follow
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followed
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by 4 ways to gather information feedback.
Firstly
, raw materials or manufactured components are
being
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apply
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stored
while
the producing strategy
are
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is
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prepared. Product research is
neccessary
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necessary
to design and set up production plans, when it is ready, the assembly, inspection, and testing steps will be next before
packaging
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the packaging
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stage.
Afterward
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Afterwards
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, goods are
delieverd
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delivered
to stores and
saled
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sold
to the public.
Along with
the flow of
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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process, the reviews are being gathered. Collecting
feedbacks
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feedback
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at the sales stage, which will decide whether to research the market or to change the production plans. If they research the market, the company will test to agree on the adjustment of design, advertising and packaging.
Whereas
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When
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the production planning is changed, it will lead back to the storage step.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer goods manufacturing
  • stages
  • diagram
  • information feedback
  • adjustment
  • raw material extraction
  • processing
  • component manufacturing
  • assembly
  • packaging
  • overview
  • feedback loop
  • summarize
  • main points
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